documentation: wording improvements

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Signed-off-by: Elijah Newren <newren@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
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Elijah Newren
2023-10-08 06:45:03 +00:00
committed by Junio C Hamano
parent 3a06386e31
commit cf6cac2005
74 changed files with 134 additions and 133 deletions

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@ -61,8 +61,8 @@ complete cut across the DAG, or the client has said "done".
Without multi_ack, a client sends have lines in --date-order until
the server has found a common base. That means the client will send
have lines that are already known by the server to be common, because
they overlap in time with another branch that the server hasn't found
a common base on yet.
they overlap in time with another branch on which the server hasn't found
a common base yet.
For example suppose the client has commits in caps that the server
doesn't and the server has commits in lower case that the client
@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ to disable the feature in a backwards-compatible manner.
side-band, side-band-64k
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This capability means that server can send, and client understand multiplexed
This capability means that the server can send, and the client can understand, multiplexed
progress reports and error info interleaved with the packfile itself.
These two options are mutually exclusive. A modern client always
@ -163,14 +163,14 @@ Further, with side-band and its up to 1000-byte messages, it's actually
same deal, you have up to 65519 bytes of data and 1 byte for the stream
code.
The client MUST send only maximum of one of "side-band" and "side-
band-64k". Server MUST diagnose it as an error if client requests
The client MUST send only one of "side-band" and "side-
band-64k". The server MUST diagnose it as an error if client requests
both.
ofs-delta
---------
Server can send, and client understand PACKv2 with delta referring to
The server can send, and the client can understand, PACKv2 with delta referring to
its base by position in pack rather than by an obj-id. That is, they can
send/read OBJ_OFS_DELTA (aka type 6) in a packfile.
@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ the current shallow boundary, instead of the depth from remote refs.
no-progress
-----------
The client was started with "git clone -q" or something, and doesn't
The client was started with "git clone -q" or something similar, and doesn't
want that side band 2. Basically the client just says "I do not
wish to receive stream 2 on sideband, so do not send it to me, and if
you did, I will drop it on the floor anyway". However, the sideband